Burn them gangstas!
As far as I'm concerned, the editing was the downfall. Your audio needs to be a a little bit cleaner, and better equalized throughout; tt was very hard to hear the sniper's voice over the background.
Pretty cool until it got to the end with the random TF2 logo in there. I'm pretty sure by the description and the content people know its TF2... you don't need to promote a game that isnt yours so blatently.
No, I didn't need to. But I did because I wanted to emulate the official videos as close as I'm capable of. So if they have it in theirs, I do in mine.
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